'Like the others, I think that you're carrying on from AS is a really cool idea. Your pitch is full of information! It's good to know what you're doing in detail so we can get a good idea of what your plan is in our heads, and it looks good, suitable for your audience!'
'I like how they have got a lot of ideas for the location, so they always have a location to fall back on just in case something goes wrong. But I do think doing it by the sea will be a lot of hard work and unreliable because of British weather.'
'Nice idea to take the band from your AS work and work further on that, it was a nice pitch.'
I'm really happy with all of the above feedback, it's all positive and there is one aspect in which i'm going to comment on, as the second comment says, filming by the sea will be hard as we can't guarantee we'll get the perfect weather on the day we choose to go, but we're currently looking for other locations which feature water, as it is a location we really want to include in our video, back up plans are currently being though of. The feedback is all constructive which i'm really happy with and we've not been scrutinized on anything which is also a bonus, i'm glad our pitch included enough information for our audience to get a clear idea of what we want to do which is what we wanted to achieve as we included as much information as we could in our pitch.
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